What You’ll Get
Part A — Scorecard
Ratings from 0 to 5 on clarity, cohesion, brevity, readability, and structure. Includes a verdict: “Will it get read?”Part B — Action Plan & Slide Map
Top 5 fixes to sharpen your deck. A 10- to 12-slide map with your narrative intent and target word counts. A 48-hour revision checklist.Part C — Rewrites & Refinements
Logline rewrite (before vs after). Revised Tone / World / Why Now sections. Trimmed character slide guidance. Up to 3 comps with rationale. Copy-flow edits and “red flag” fixes.
Mini How It Works
Purchase → Receive access pack
Use the ChatGPT agent for upload
Get immediate feedback
Visit your guide for deeper learning
Iterate until ready
Why This Works
Your notes are not generic AI. This reviewer is trained on my voice and 15 years of pitch experience. It delivers insight with clarity — combining speed and precision.
You’ll get depth without fluff: the same framework I use when working with Netflix, PBS, indie labs, and festival projects.
Who This Is For
Filmmakers and writers testing early drafts
Creators applying to labs, fellowships, or grants
Producers or collaborators wanting a clean second opinion
What This Does Not Include
Full visual redesigns or layout overhauls
Unlimited rounds of revision
Live consultations (that’s offered through the Private Consultation service)